It is SO CREEPY. Like, c'mon, they are pretty young...and that stuff would creep out men much older.
Lil bit of an odd transition from brothers to brother lovers...
I didn't think about that, actually, but rereading it, I can see what you mean. It is seemingly random, and that makes me wrinkle my nose up a little bit. So thank you for calling it to my attention. I think I can fix it with a sentence or two, so there is that.
And thank you so much! I'm glad you found it comforting and I am delighted you liked the Danielle intro..because I think that her and Kevin are adorable. :-D
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Date: 8 Aug 2009 05:51 (UTC)Lil bit of an odd transition from brothers to brother lovers...
I didn't think about that, actually, but rereading it, I can see what you mean. It is seemingly random, and that makes me wrinkle my nose up a little bit. So thank you for calling it to my attention. I think I can fix it with a sentence or two, so there is that.
And thank you so much! I'm glad you found it comforting and I am delighted you liked the Danielle intro..because I think that her and Kevin are adorable. :-D
Thank you for your lovely review! ♥