ext_52657: Lyrics from Empires (Midnight Land), Icon by me! (Pretty KJO)
ext_52657 ([identity profile] mayqueen517.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mayqueen517 2009-08-08 05:51 am (UTC)

It is SO CREEPY. Like, c'mon, they are pretty young...and that stuff would creep out men much older.

Lil bit of an odd transition from brothers to brother lovers...

I didn't think about that, actually, but rereading it, I can see what you mean. It is seemingly random, and that makes me wrinkle my nose up a little bit. So thank you for calling it to my attention. I think I can fix it with a sentence or two, so there is that.

And thank you so much! I'm glad you found it comforting and I am delighted you liked the Danielle intro..because I think that her and Kevin are adorable. :-D

Thank you for your lovely review! ♥

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